Feedback From The First Pitch...N01

After having to pitches one which was a documentary and the other a drama my lecturers gave us their opinions and which traffic light indicated it was a piece well worth taking further action for in the production process. Nadine had stated as far as she knew, since the last pitch she had and the feedback we received from Roddy, she had to go back to Jazzy band group that she decided to work on and gather further information that will grab the audience is attention. 

What is happening now is that, we have to re-pitch the idea again this time and what we did was met up with the guy who Nadine wanted to focus on and we decided on a few interesting stories about him which she will be putting together and ready for the pitch on Wednesday or Friday.

The Pitch Was About A Day In The Life Of R.S.M Squad.

Not many people love to hear the word of God, mostly because it sounds boring and out of tune to their daily living. But a music band has made this possible to get the message across. Not only hearing of the word through its lyrics but also believing it and it is express through music and in the form of Soul, RnB, Hip Hop, etc., an everyday music that everyone listens to. This makes it easy getting the message across and even though not everyone likes to hear about God, but with the genre of music, they will listen to it more.

Meanwhile,I was working of the story of my drama which features two best friend, one is at war and they fall into an issue of love with a woman caught in between them. Roddy suggested we have a sort of twist to the drama so it not predictable and the audience are engaged on whats happening. In this case i decided to change the name to WAR>LOVE>GUILT because two friends form a bond which is developed through out the drama and are guilty that they share an intense moment and later see the shadows of their dead best friend appear.